In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.
Today, It is true that several country the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. Some people believe that food influence people stamina and also physical body. In this essay, I would examine that considering food can control health and fitness balancing. Other side which affect as physically are weight person. Causes determine our daily meal affect body metabolism and flow to deal to this problem before coming to reasonable conclusion.
There are several reasons of the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. Firstly, daily people activities begin from their wake up until sleep again. It is due to the body movement influence circular anatomy of human body like lymphatic and immunity system. For example, lymphatic system works based on the joint movement as people act. There are also immunity system in each indentation joint which produce body immunity. Secondly, daily people food or meals while doing they activity. It is because people need more energy for starting live such us thinking, working, swimming, running and etc. Taken as an example, people always take breakfast before going to work and having lunch in the break time.
To the deal with this case, Nevertheless, by controlling food and meals by knowing everyday nutrition need for our body. It is because, food nutrition benefit for health and equalize the average weight. Secondly, by doing some sport every morning even in the afternoon or night. It is due to body fitness and body metabolism. Muscular system is working as well if we move accurately. It can form body goals like any famous athlete. Body metabolism is processing together with other circular system like muscular and lymphatic system. It will be built body immunity and strong body.
From where I stand, I believe that many people will doing everything to balance their weight. They also allow health and fitness body. So, they have to compare with their daily activity and daily food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...us thinking, working, swimming, running and etc. Taken as an example, people always take...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... stand, I believe that many people will doing everything to balance their weight. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41491614854 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510447761194 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6464534595 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4583333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9583333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218001669792 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683215996471 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846532721214 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147872821724 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595635948401 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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