Nowadays lots of novelists and television production house are focusing in making a story line based on crime. This is because people are really interested in watching such type of crime series, as they can relate it with what is happening in their surroundings. I believe, such books or series can help people to differentiate between the good and the bad, however the content really matters a lot, it is important that the story line should aim to focus more toward the positive side and do not influence people to follow the wrong path.
Crime series have gained popularity, especially among young generation. So many web series are released on regular basis with an increase in number of viewers too. For instance crime dramas like Breaking Bad, Narcos and Sacred games are top 3 series on Netflix, having maximum views and popularity. The most possible reason of such huge audience could be that such dramas have a lot of use of arms and ammunitions, nudity, violence as well as abusive language. Such content are found to be admired by these young adults. Apart from this adult content, people find it quiet informative, as they can know the kind of criminal activity that is going on in the society, and also can alert themselves from being a prey to such crimes.
On the other hand, what matters the most is the kind of crime shown in such series. As, majority of the audience are young people, they are easily influenced by these shows and are more likely to end up committing a crime. This can be said as this crime shows a way to easy money, young adults are attracted towards it. However, it is necessary for such series to make a good point and show how the law acts on these criminal activities and how they are punished. In this way people can have good insights of the kind of crime activity and its relative punishments.
In conclusion, such web series and books gives a lot of crime related information to the society, by spreading awareness of some criminal activities and how one can save oneself from becoming a victim. Also, law and punishment should be given a great importance in such dramas as it will ensure that young people are not encouraged by such crime activities to get easy money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69309462916 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4909435585 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514066496164 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7612096354 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190978387855 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766091806834 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439897752573 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131284498749 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338638344966 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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