There has been a controversy for long enough that advertisements make people to buy things that are not actually needed, wheres as other states that adverts help in gaining useful information about that product, which sometimes directly helps to improve our day to day life. I support the later one, as many of the products that I am using in daily life are the result of watching advertise, that had helped me a lot to save time and energy.
In this digital era, we are surrounded by the advertisements in our routine life. Like adverts in smartphone, television, during browsing the internet, on the big screen that are there on the streets etc. The companies are also investing a lot of money in advertising, by hiring popular faces like film stars for promoting their products.
The technology in this generation has boost up a lot. So without the help of advertisements, people would have very limited knowledge about the new products coming in the market. Showing the product digitally helps everyone to know about that particular product, its effectiveness and usage in their lives. For example. dishwasher, people would not know such product is in the market if it is not advertise properly. it saves a lot of time and energy for working people.
The one where advertisement is making a negative impact in peoples life is in the ads of smartphone, this is a problem with teenagers. A new phone even though costlier and few new features would interest a teenage to buy it. However, they would not be needing hose features. So such activities can to be controlled by parents.
In conclusion, advertisements helps a lot in knowing the latest and the advance product in the market and help in making everyone's life a little more easy and comfortable by saving a lot of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: where's
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Suggestion: Dishwasher
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advertised'.
Suggestion: advertised
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Suggestion: It
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8338762215 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83324715022 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1332605981 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174212117288 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565998836838 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481512147831 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947505987132 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347170055338 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.