You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr. John,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter regarding the seminar that is going to held in France. I came to know about this event from one of my colleague, but I am not aware about the details. I am quite interested to attend this knowledgeable discussion that will be delivered by experts.
It will be a great help if you can share the exact date and timings of the event with me. I think, that this program is regarding the team management, and this is my area of interest. I do not want to miss this golden opportunity. Just want to make sure about the stay and total cost that I have to pay to be a part of this event.
You can share all the information related to this seminar through an email. I will be waiting for your prompt reply.
Thank you for your time and help.
Yours Sincerely,
Karamdeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... regarding the seminar that is going to held in France. I came to know about this ev...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., but I am not aware about the details. I am quite interested to attend this know...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36477987421 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38912597953 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.099568962 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.8333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150536422379 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05912152149 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666331839433 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931730577447 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039440295589 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.