Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business To what extent do you agree

Although that many people think that marketing and promotions is the most important part in making a business successful. But I strongly disagree, it is absolutely one of many reasons that businesses use to be generate more revenues, but not the only one.

To start, for a business to be successful it has to be build correctly beginning of the business's idea. Does the idea solve a real problem that facing a great amount of people or not?. Second, the quality of your service or product must be very high comparing to your other competitors. So, having amazing marketing campaign with a low quality product or service might get you customers but they will be one-time clients science your product doesn't stood up to their expectations because of your over promoting of your product.

In addition, beside of focusing on your marketing you should put most of your efforts in training your employees well and make sure they fully understand what they are selling. Moreover, by having an outstanding customer service your clients will start talking positively about your business. Therefore, because all of the word of mouth your business will have a huge customer base of people who will choose your product over any other product.

On the other hand, if you spent most of your energy and budget on marketing whether via streets signs or through famous people on social media platforms like most businesses do nowadays. You may choose the wrong influencer which will result in a very negative impact on people who hate him, so they will not buy your product. Also, could effect on their families and friends too.

At the end, marketing and promotions are not the main reasons for a business to be successful. Therefore, I recommend that business owners should care much more on other aspects of their businesses than marketing like customer services and quality of the products they produce or sell.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95950155763 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55409159893 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4039655147 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176542835805 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694475076282 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608267689888 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115916302746 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391757079564 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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