Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business To what extent do you agree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion and may increase customer loyalty. However, quality also plays a vital role...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'after all', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254777070064 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.140127388535 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923566878981 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541401273885 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509554140127 0.0437548338989 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114649681529 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0286624203822 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96025003032 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191082802548 0.0326793684256 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0859872611465 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254777070064 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0254777070064 0.011925033212 214% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1849.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51056338028 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.447183098592 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.408450704225 0.28420135186 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.288732394366 0.203846283523 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.204225352113 0.137316102897 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96025003032 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.2542944015 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8461538462 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.002229033 49.517814964 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.230769231 127.492653851 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 0.814263465372 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 62.6912242687 49.1944974215 127% => OK
Elegance: 1.62337662338 1.69124875643 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270041985056 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112391441947 0.102741220458 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785774087989 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526195686043 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197632965894 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109868362812 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583918264921 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224286401461 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0424573745305 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18139683855 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024949596228 0.058150111329 43% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9

We are living in an era which is marked by digital revolution. From the daily routines to business digital world has impacted everything. With this change, some people believe that for a business to be successful, it must have excellent marketing and promotion. In my opinion, advertising is always the second most important thing, primary being focusing on the main product/ service.

Marketing a business has great benefits. Firstly, a large group of people get to know about it. Obviously, the more the awareness, more will be your customers. Secondly, it brings customers on the right side. A customer is able to make more knowledge able guess of the product after seeing an advertisement. Thirdly, a market space gets created for the business. For instance, when android phones came, they were not the utmost priority of everyone. It was because of their promotion that they got noticed and their need was felt.

However, simply having promoted a product is not enough. One surely gets to know about the business but after a certain time, it all depends on how good the product/service is. Even more, if the marketing team promotes a product in a way that is different from the actual product, it leads to distrust among consumers about the business.

Overall, in my opinion, we as individuals are quick to make decisions and the marketing of a product surely plays a very important role. However, it is not the only deciding factor. The final success of a business depends both on the efficiency of product and its marketing.