Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the new innovation’s mankind is becoming more dependent on technology. One group of people argues that robots are crucial for future development, while other group believes that robots will have adverse effect on society. In my opinion robots are important for development but human beings should not completely depend on them.
With the advent of technology, it is inevitable for human being to ignore the positive developments with the use of technology in the world, which made the life easier for everyone. Robots are the one the fantastic innovation human being ever made and these innovations are evolving as the time pass. For instance with development of Drone’s military can easily spy around border of nation and keep track of the movements near the border. There are reports that if robots are introduced in the military there will be lesser causalities which inturn a boon for the nation.
On the other hand, as everything comes with some side effects, innovation in the technology do also has its draw backs. At one side where robots are helping country to fight rival nations on the other hand there are incidents that robots might take over human beings, such incident is when facebook built two robots by using Artificial intelligence for helping in business, instead of helping these robots started to communicate in their own language which cannot be decoded because of this, facebook has to destroy this bots to take over the operations.
To recapitulate, Innovations are undeniable but as a human being we should not completely rely on the robots, instead we should utilise these advance machines for betterment of mankind and future, with caution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...For instance with development of Drone’s military can easily spy around border of...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...cause of this, facebook has to destroy this bots to take over the operations. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67970641046 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2847859218 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253967484656 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105567733344 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083188617772 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15775510908 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975884901469 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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