Population in Oman and Spain
The pie charts depict information about the number of population growth in two different areas from 2005 to 2055.
Generally, the number of elder people in Oman and Spain was the highest population, and those are predicted to have the highest population. However, adults population in Oman have the lowest percentage.
Intially, the percentage of elder people in Spain was not as much as in Oman, with 62% and 48% respectively, becoming the largest. Children in Spain was as slightly as in Oman. However, there was a minority of teenagers in Oman, being lowest than those in Spain.
More than a half of elder people in Oman will estimated in 2055, while there will be less than a half the ones in Spain. Kids in Oman are accounted for more than a third, but those in Spain are predicted at 12%. 42% of adults in Spain are showed, compared with adults population in Oman, contributing at only less than one in ten.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'estimate'
Suggestion: estimate
...han a half of elder people in Oman will estimated in 2055, while there will be less than ...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...those in Spain are predicted at 12%. 42% of adults in Spain are showed, compared ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6975308642 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5676415467 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0813711271 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476538562893 0.215688989381 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22371318235 0.103423049105 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787102434378 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272748455709 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107593284879 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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