It's true that a counties effectiveness can be measured by well being of it's citizens in some cases. However, there are certain cases were this is not the right way to judge a leader.
In an underdeveloped country, even the most effective leader might not be able to lift the lives of the citizens to ultimate well being that can be seen in other already developed countries. Consider an under developed nation hit by a malady. the most effective leader of this country might try to uplift the lives of it's citizens by improving healthcare of nation. he might succeed in saving many lives but some could still die because of inherent health care limitations country had before this leader took power. Also he might want lift the countries economy by trying to industialize the coutnry , fighting against internal corruption. He might be succesfull in his effforts to some extent. But ultimate well being of this country also depends on the condition of the country before this leader came to power. Even though this leader has improved the quality of life, the country is yet to reach the apotheosis of it's development. In these scenarios effectiveness of the leader should be measured by relative improvement that happened in the nation and not merely on countries citizens ultimate well being.
Even in a developed country, if a leader focuses on only the current well being of it's citizens it's not good enough. For example, if a countries leader is effective in all the countries internal affairs but have not maintained good international relations. May be an oil producing countries leader refuse to provide oil to other nations and thus made the country a 'villain' in the eyes of rest of the world. This may not have immediate consequences, but in future this will affect the well being of the citizens. Thus a leader, apart from current well being of citizens, should also be focused on nation's future too.
With all the limitations of measuring effectiveness of a leader by countries citizens well-being, one must admit that it's one of the main parameter to measure a leader's effectivess. cirizens will lead a prosperous life in someones tenure in leadership position only if that leader is effective. A good leader identifies the problems in the society, listen to netizens demands and effectively works to resolve the issues which leads to ultimate well being of the citizens.
In conclusion, a leaders effectiveness can not just be measured by well being of countries citizens. one must consider the future implications and past status of the nation to better judge a leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95871559633 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78651267748 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438073394495 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3158972889 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.952380952 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362737238161 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130392674906 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774729875446 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234991598056 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309073721598 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.