Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
It has been seen that many people fall into a huge amount of borrowing money issues due to purchasing unwanted stuff which is much costlier for them to purchase. This is because an attractive advertisement offers on products and this issue can be mitigated by increasing awareness about the darker side of borrowing from others.
Nowadays, the majority of young ones get easily influenced by advertisements having more digital effects. Because of this, many manufacturers directly took the disadvantages of this evolution and trying to launch their products in such a way that people buy it with their first choice irrespective of their income and need. For example, In India, many car companies had modified their vehicles with fewer design changes of new trends and publish their old model with high prices to consume more teenagers who do not have enough knowledge about the future.
The best effort to overcome this issue by making a campaign and demonstrating people with the future negative aspects of debt. Hence, once people have depth knowledge about this wrong money-making business, they will think twice prior to shop anything that they actually not required. with this step, people can satisfy their needs without any fear of borrowing money from others. For instance, In many rural parts of India, authorities had already started to aware of their people by showing the truth in media and other sources.
In conclusion, it is a herculean task for an individual to control their priorities, the government should publishers who demonstrate more offers with less content and also take steps to aware of their people to save their communities from falling into debt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16423357664 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65091411085 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0338123209 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251861879187 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109561654586 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540213286996 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157558724255 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623248477217 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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