Both the reading and the listening discuss the forest fire suppression in the United States. The author believes that there are three detrimental effect for the the let it burn" policy and provides the example of forest fires in Yellowstone in 1988 as a compelling illustration. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that the "let it burn" strategy is very creative and beneficial.
To begin with, the author suggests that the fires that occurred in Yellowstone destroyed all the tees and plants there including the small plants. The lecturer challenges this specific argument by asserting that the plant species in Yellowstone park became more diverse and it has been colonized by new plants. Moreover, she mentions that the fires created opportunities for new plants to grow for instance, the burned trees were taken over by the plant that need open and unshaded areas. In addition, some seeds started to germinates after the exposure to heat of the fire. Therefore, the Yellowstone park became more diverse.
Secondly, the writer argues that Yellowstone fires had a harmful effect on the large creatures that live there like deer and elk and the small animals could not escape the fire as well. Hence, the disruption in food chain was happened.
The lecturer, however, rebuts this claim by explaining that the populations recovered after the fires and provide new chances for new animals to live there. Yellowstone park become ideal habitat to small animals like rabbits and hares which create an opportunity for predators to live there. As a result, the food chain become stronger than before.
Finally, the author posits that the fires decreased the park' value as tourist attraction, which had drastic outcomes on the local businesses and economy. In contrast, the lecturer casts doubt on this claim by the fires in 1988 were very unusual event due to high winds and does not happen frequently. Furthermore . she mentions that these fires were devastating and caused massive damages. However, these fires have not occurred since 1988 and after that tourists come every year. Thus, the local economy is not affected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14084507042 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57666657575 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523943661972 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3834009782 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0526315789 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205402593985 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573671023905 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663290372986 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112946010074 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814447158598 0.0443174109184 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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