Employees play an important role in the development of a company and help achieving its monthly targets and yearly budgets and the overall success of the company relies on is employees
Employees play an important role in the development of a company and help achieving its monthly targets and yearly budgets and the overall success of the company relies on is employees. In my view companies should involve their employees in some form of decision-making process in a highly competitive environment the management and employees should work as one team to help a make profit.
Firstly, an employee’s feedback is a valuable tool towards the growth of the company. Because different employees are allocated to work in specific areas and the experience gained by working in those areas can give vital feedback as they are aware of each and every aspect of the company. So that they will give a genuine review about anything. On the other hand, their input should be taken into consideration by the higher management so that they will know the true picture of the company.
Secondly, the involvement of the employees will give a huge boost in confidence to the employee if their suggestions are taken in. Hence, they will be motivated with work more dedication and concentration. On the other hand, if we treat them like any other employee, they will work for the sake of working and will not have any impact on the growth of the company. Therefore, if we want 100% input from our employees, we should give some form of decision-making rights and final review should be taken by top management and treat the employees as a part of the company.
Furthermore, for the companies sustained growth and profitability both top-level management and employees should work together as one team. the contribution of both is essential for the success and growth of the organization. The knowledge, ideas would help the company grow rapidly. In conclusion, if a company wants to survive in the current competitive environment, should consider employees' opinions too. Hence that they are the backbone that helps any company rise to the top.
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| 2020-10-24 | Patrick_17 | 65 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to achieve' or 'achieve'.
Suggestion: to achieve; achieve
...n the development of a company and help achieving its monthly targets and yearly budgets ...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f each and every aspect of the company. So that they will give a genuine review about a...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...oyees should work together as one team. the contribution of both is essential for t...
^^^
Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...should consider employees opinions too. Hence that they are the backbone that helps a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 324.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00617283951 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90263953373 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478395061728 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5629358219 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33625402242 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132094938232 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221909627838 0.071462118173 311% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244982156186 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232924408645 0.0609392437508 382% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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