The picture illustrates the production of electricity from geothermal energy.
It is clear that there are five stages in the process. The process begins with the flow of cold water and ends at electricity which is produced in a generator turbine.
At the first stage, cold water is pumped down 4.5 kilometers to underground where it is heated and moved in a geothermal zone by hot rocks in the second step (the injection well). Next step called “The production well” is the pump up of hot water created at the beginning.
Looking at 2 rest stages, hot water is brought to a condenser linked to a generator turbine to allow the steam which is the power for a machine in this turbine. Finally, the next machine is powered by turbine and it is the central of all process which produce electricity for electricity networks thanks to the connection with power poles outside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, second, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76973684211 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6838154379 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7805357006 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840365389546 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425648534567 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386592972024 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598124576763 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227813859284 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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