a letter for complaint

Essay topics:

a letter for complaint

Hung Vuong street
SocTrang-VietNam
The Director
English for today centre
731 Van Xuan street
HaNoi-VietNam
25 October 2020
Today I am writing this letter to talk about some of my frustrations about the center, this is my personal opinion and I really want you to change and improve the center.
I'm not happy about it, i think it has many problem because there are so many VietNamese teachers teaching English,We really need native speakers to be able to experience and test our abilities. And In one class have more than 30 students, it sucks, the study environment is not good. Next is I had to pay for books and casette tapes, every classroom doesn't have an air conditions, it uses fans instead and the end is the time : class is begins too late, but it finishes early.
I want you to changes this, my phone ís (84) 54125596 , call me when you needed.
Yours faithfully
Quii_are_quis
Ta Phu Qui

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 99, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ustrations about the center, this is my personal opinion and I really want you to change and imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... you to change and improve the center. Im not happy about it, i think it has many...
^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ove the center. Im not happy about it, i think it has many problem because there...
^
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... Im not happy about it, i think it has many problem because there are so many VietNamese te...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , We
...any VietNamese teachers teaching English,We really need native speakers to be able ...
^^^
Line 9, column 350, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ooks and casette tapes, every classroom doesnt have an air conditions, it uses fans in...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to changes this, my phone ís 84 54125596 , call me when you needed. Yours faithfu...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69333271709 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748427672956 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.8647951242 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824658790333 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269515573982 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392540564396 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06728892881 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634033750733 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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