Local government are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations . What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Local governments are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
It is believed that industries are enforced by local states to shift from urban to rural areas. while there are some benefits like less noise and air pollution in cities, creating employments for regional people, the disadvantage might be unemployment in the cities and lack of transportation will be the biggest challenge for companies.
On the one hand, there are three major merits of shifting industries to local areas. The prime benefits are less noise and air pollution in megacities. This might be because some companies like textiles and automobiles produce a huge amount of noise and air pollution when these are powered by generators, so if these are moved from these areas, such problems will be permanently vanished. For example, in Delhi where a textile company was existed in order to produce clothes and threads, however, it had increased carbon emissions and noise which had made people's lives more vulnerable. Thus the state has decided to move these factories. however, it may result in more employment for regional people. in other words, when these will be shifted in such locations that are still underprivileged, local people may get opportunities to work there since companies have to employ new workers. Therefore both urban and rural people may take benefits from this movement.
On the other hand, despite there might be numerous benefits, the movement of companies from urban to rural will result in a lack of transportation for companies and loss of employment for citizens. This is because rural areas are not well connected with major cities due to scarcity of widened roads and railway stations, so they would confront to transport their products to areas where they are required, for instance, as the government has moved diary companies in remote areas, they may not export products to metropolitan areas where these are consumed more, so these companies may result in lack of profits due to not have a good transportation system. In addition to this, if these are disappeared in cities, the citizen may also lose their employment since most are recruited by such firms and in the future, they may have to live in poverty. Therefore, these disadvantages may be detrimental to both.
In conclusion, although this movement of companies might be benefited for reducing pollution in cities and providing employment to rural people, its demerits which can not be overseen may imbalance life of a citizen as they may be no longer to save their livelihood and companies could not earn enough profits owing to lack of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13122171946 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80784817679 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463800904977 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.824449484 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.411764706 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289572393324 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123098997155 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152434923507 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275029026172 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.297515295805 0.056905535591 523% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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