You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain - Why you changed jobs- Describe your new job-Tell him/her your other news

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You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain

- Why you changed jobs
- Describe your new job
-Tell him/her your other news

Dear Varun,

It has been sometime since I last wrote to you. Of late, I have been very busy with my professional and personal life and hence have been out of touch with my friends. Through this letter I am sharing two big and wonderful developments of my life with you.

You must remember that I used to talk a lot of Dr. Prasad during our college days. I used to find him an exemplary technocrat and a visionary. The good news is that now I have got the chance to work directly under him. I have changed my job and have taken up the position of assistant researcher in his team in the ...

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Sentence: I have changed my job and have taken up the position of assistant researcher in his team in the organisation headed by him.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 886 1000
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.083 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.33 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.348 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.229 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4

Thanks a lot for rating the letter. Is it necessary to have 4 paragraphs? If yes, then could you provide some guidance referring the above letter as to what content can be put in the 4th paragraph. And what else can be improved to achieve a score of 8 or more? Thanks