In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying fact that nowadays women and men hold equivalent position in society. In this modern and competitive ear, it is not possible for a single person to manage all the finances alone. Therefore, it becomes accountability of both the partners to share this burden. In my opinion, all the work should be shared by both of them at equal basis.
To embark on, there are multiple factors that contribute this notion. Firstly, for women is it very essential to work, not just to share finances even to make their own identity. After getting married most of the women take break from work to perform house hold activities. This restrain them from work as well as, it becomes arduous for them go and find work after such break. Therefore, due to paramount importance of work women should not leave it for taking care of their home. Additionally, sharing work loads should be moral duty of both the partners. It will go effortlessly if both of them share house chores and it will not cause trouble for a single person. Due to devoid of time it is not easy to manage all the thing alone, which results in mental and health difficulties. As well as, sharing house hold tasks promotes harmony and sense of belongingness.
Moreover, every coin has reverse side too. When men start sharing house hold work sometimes it turns into a matter of fight between them. Men are not as perfect as women when it comes to perform house chores. Lack of perfection in the task resulted in putting extra effort to make things perfect. Every work entails learning so, this is the responsibility of women to teach them. Also, with proper guidance can thing can be taught.
In my conclusion, I believe that no work is gender specific. Men and women should share all the work together in order to help each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47066568288 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3158494718 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252906534427 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077926602866 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599553436229 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169070262686 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236503560754 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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