Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Children are future of the society. Their nourishment entails a lot of care and efforts. There are fair amount of people believe that children should be involved in some social activities to polish their personality. I also agree with this opinion, and with proper consideration of all the facts I would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
To embark on, there are multiple befits of doing unpaid social work. When teenagers contributes in community work, they learn the sense of belongingness. They help others without any self motive, which inculcates the notion of cooperation, sympathy, patience, kindness and care in them. Community work requires tasks where they have to communicate with people of different attitude and other regions. This stimulates their verbal skills for future reference. Also, they learn how to talk and convince someone for their own betterment. For instance, sometimes they need to go and talk to the people of rural area for sending their kids to school. They learn how to adjust themselves socially while working with others. Needless to say that, social work develop number of qualities in children, which play significant role in making them better person.
However, every coin has reserve side too. The drawback of doing unpaid community work can not be ignored? Schools encourages them to participate in social work or co curricular activities, consumes most of their time. Children are meant to study and focus on building their future, In this competitive ear devoting their precious time at something without any personal gain is questionable. Additionally, it can also be matter of consideration that most of the children will try to pass their time for the shake of community work and restrict themselves from study.
In conclusion I would say children are tender buds we can mould them accordingly. They should take part in such activities however, lot of guidance and monitoring by parents is necessitated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...lot of care and efforts. There are fair amount of people believe that children should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22082018927 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79329301081 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4981012202 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278582994011 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816798075542 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847664190146 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147815183391 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764769516191 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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