learning foreign language
The table compares and contrasts data on the result of a study conducted to reveal the reason of people who decided to study a foreign language.
A closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that the main and most common reason for learning another language was in order to travel, whereas the least important reason was to join the business training policy.
More specifically, the first main reason for people learning foreign language for going on a personal travelling reached a little over half with exactly 54%, while business trips reason as the second main reason was used by 36% of the people surveyed, with a difference of 18%. A planning to continue further study in other country made 22% of the people questioned had to learn other language, which was placed as the third rank.
Another fact worth noticing is the fact that there were two other reasons which caused some people to study a foreign language, with a notable 12%, in order to make friends or it was their spouse’s first language.
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for people learning foreign languages
A planning to continue further study in other country made 22% of the people questioned had to learn other language, which was placed as the third rank.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: More specifically, the first main reason for people learning foreign language for going on a personal travelling reached a little over half with exactly 54, while business trips reason as the second main reason was used by 36 of the people surveyed, with a difference of 18.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to trips and reason
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 10
No. of Words: 175 200
No. of Characters: 815 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.637 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.349 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.772 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.554 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.895 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4