Advantages of learning foreign language

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Advantages of learning foreign language

Nowadays, in the integration trend, people use not only mother tongue but also foreign languages for different purposes. Therefore, learning other languages is really necessary for most people because of following benefits.
The most important advantage of learning at least one foreign language is that people can simply approach a huge source of valuable documents written in foreign languages which broaden their mind significantly. For example, basing on three major languages such as English, French and German, most academic books and papers are typed. Therefore, to understand these documents, readers must know these languages.
In addition, knowing at least one foreign language makes people find a job easily. Many well- paid jobs require employees know other languages, especially English. For instance, in my country, travel agents only employ fluently English speakers since everyday they have to communicate with tourists from all over the world. Hence, many graduated people take part in English courses to get the certificate which meet the company’s requirement before they apply to there.
Finally, learning at least one foreign language helps people acquire a wide knowledge of culture and custom of other nations in the world. A variety of documents written in foreign languages display a great deal of living aspects such as nature, society, culture and history of a lot of countries. If people understand these documents’ content, their mind can be broadened. They even feel comfortable when they travel or work abroad.
In conclusion, knowing at least one foreign language is necessary for everyone in studying, finding a good job and widening knowledge. Therefore, people should choose some foreign languages to learn before they become elders.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun well seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many wells'.
Suggestion: Many wells
...anguage makes people find a job easily. Many well- paid jobs require employees know other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, really, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 965.302439024 157% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7465351521 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9227030926 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359639997694 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123581824776 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12734260185 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229774613342 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955344087251 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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