providing him information about a type of washing machine
Dear Sir,
I am really pleased with your letter in which you would like to receive full information of Toshiba AWD-130S washing machine. Hence, I will write you to supply detailed characters of the product in order to you can make an accurate decision.
Firstly, it is the most up- to- date device imported totally since last week from Japan. Besides, it goes along with a twenty-four-month-lengthen guaranty from the manufacturer. The product saves water significantly as it takes only thirty liters of water for each stage of 12- kilogram capacity whereas the normal ones spend twice times liters of water. Moreover, it is equipped SDD inverter motor, so there is a little noise and vibration when it is working. A part from above major features, the price is reasonable costs 550 dollars for each one; especially, on the golden week from 1st to 7th next month, customers bought the item will receive a 150- USD- priced Japanese cooker as a gift.
If you would like to know more information of the product, please search the company website or make a phone call to the hotline. I hope that you have a good choice.
Yours faithfully,
Linda
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83248730964 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8894353445 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705583756345 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7170333038 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0417079619855 0.216113520407 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146808073536 0.0766984524023 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308673869069 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365899620243 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276916298863 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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