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People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success.
Many people are successful in life, which can be explained not only by their hard work. In this essay I am going to consider that luck is as important as the ability to dedicate our time and energy to work.
We must acknowledge that without deep understanding of what we do and how we do we can hardly achieve positive outcomes. There are millions of employees who do not go beyond their duties, not moving deeper to comprehend that the process is about. Consequently they see only a visible side of the iceberg. They are quite satisfied being paid a decent salary and having some bonuses. Suc...
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Sentence: But only with luck a person can achieve recogniseable success.
Error: recogniseable Suggestion: recognizable
flaws:
Don't use 'not only...but also...' a lot of times in one essay. You may use 'neither....nor', 'either...or...', 'both....and...'
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 1770 1500
No. of Different Words: 225 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.538 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.594 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.084 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.247 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5