In the recent time, there is an upsurging trend of focusing more on university level education has been seen. Some people feel the need for that while others claim that skill training must be motivated as there is shortage of skill workers. In this essay I will discuss why university education is more preferred in comparison to professional training.
To begin with, going to universities for higher studies provides better job perspectives. Most of the collages make arrangements for campus job interviews and placements in the final year where students are eligible to get jobs in multinational companies based on their performances. Currently, the big four companies such as Google, Meta, Amazon and Tesla are mostly hiring from renowned institutions. Therefore, this level of assurance will boost students from early days.
Apart from excellent career opportunities, uplifting inner skills and talents is another moto of these institutions. This can be done by organizing youth and cultural festivals where they will learn about critical aspects such as planning, management and execution. All of these will prepare them for future higher management level positions .Research has shown that recent established entrepreneurs were once indulged in all sort of these kind of activities in their collage life. The more they are exposed to such environment, the more opportunities are waiting for them.
Despite the perks ,however, pertaining university education is not everyone’s cup of tea. Their fee structures and criteria are sometimes painful for many average students. On the other hand, there is much more variety of duration in vocational courses than in the conventionally academic world. For example, students in the UK can earn a Hair & Makeup Artistry diploma in 6 months, and budding chefs can gain a Professional Cookery diploma in just a year! A shorter course means that students are paying less fees. Broadly speaking, vocational courses take practical and hands-on approaches.
To conclude, there is no doubt in the fact that there is greater need of skilled workers but having university education can certainly give assurance about future life and offer wider variety of options
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, broadly speaking, for example, kind of, no doubt, sort of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39884393064 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90972393337 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621387283237 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0258004478 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.882352941 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118902787363 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03822249874 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329264155427 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598603451457 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231386715686 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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