"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
I totally agree that prevention is better than cure and so that a big amount of the country's health budget should be spent on health education and prevention measures.
First of all, it’s easier to stop viruses and bacteria before it gets into the human body. Because once it starts to affect human health, finding a cure and recovering the person would be harder and it might be a long process. However, if it is learned that preventing disease would be a more efficient way while dealing with bacterias. For example, there should be more attention to vaccines, one of the best preventative measures, since they help the human body to become immune. It is important to become immune to diseases and bacterias because that way, the chance of getting disease would be decreased, and possibly would not get sick as easily.
The other solution to prevent disease is to educate people about health conditions, bacterias, and viruses. It should be shown how to prevent disease by teaching what to eat, what to wear, and what to do once the person is feeling sour. Because most people are not aware of diseases. There are plenty of ways to make them conscious for instance, giving education that focuses more on human health at schools, advertisements, videos and programs, clinics that explains how to avoid these situations, and more.
In conclusion, there should be more attention given to prevention and education about health, so that people can protect themselves and disease can be treated more easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to do once the person is feeling sour. Because most people are not aware of diseases. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97244094488 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57277063461 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4798111599 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315778590802 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12932064769 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138826666159 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255014581687 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154076278673 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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