In some countries, it can be very difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience.
What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?
It is true that in some countries, it might be very hard for the people who are over 50 to find good jobs, and some companies won't hire old people, but there are also some suitable jobs for old people. It is actually sad that old people are having problems with finding a job because, but in my opinion, they should be able to get a good job depending on their skills.
Most companies attribute the reason why they do not hire old people to they are not capable of doing most of the things nowadays, such as the internet and computer works. Today the most important skills to find a good job are computer skills, software-program skills, and that kind of other technological skills. Because now, students are taught to use computers for most of their works. Back then the education they had in order to find a good job was completely different. Consequently, skills that companies require to hire someone for work were different either.
Old people have experience in business and some of them can keep up with new technology. And I think because of that, old people can do works other than computing. Also despite the fact that they are not able to be athletes, they can work as trainers, and can use the skills that they were taught in school back then, also their experiences, and it can be very useful.
In conclusion, even though some jobs such as basketball player, swimmer, gymnasts, contortionist are not suitable for old people, they can be coaches and trainers instead. So as they can work in companies for other positions which do not include technological skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hiring
...equently, skills that companies require to hire someone for work were different either....
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ople can do works other than computing. Also despite the fact that they are not able...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70143884892 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59948526395 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2466895813 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266787974552 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103461067168 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608940552136 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180195753352 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716783510735 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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