Nowadays getting a better job has become challenging for aged people even they have enough qualifications that satisfy the requirement of the job they applied for. This essay will examine the main causes of this problem and suggest some feasible solutions to tackle this problem.
Reservation criteria and over-reliance on young employees are considered to be major causes of difficulties that aged people are going through in order to get a good job. Firstly, in many countries employment is given based on segregating people into various groups on a caste basis. Which often troubles merit people even they possess the skills required to attain an exceptional job. Secondly, companies more rely on youngsters as they are usually energetic and can provide innovative ideas while accomplishing a task at work. For instance, a company in Australia provides especially gives priority to young people for applying approximately 70% of the vacancies available in the company. Thus, people over the age of 50 are struggling to get an extraordinary job in spite of their superior experience.
Some solutions to lessen this problem are introducing a new policy by the government that supports people over the age of 50 and also guaranteeing job security. The government should step forward to make a better policy for aged people and ensure that these people are getting sufficient pay as per their experience. Besides, companies should provide job security for people with an exceptional experience for better living. For example, in India after working for 10 years or more, companies are giving better pay and additional benefits along with job security. All in all, the government plays a vital role in eradicating the issues the present aged people are facing.
To sum up, employment opportunities for old age people are becoming incredibly challenging. Caste-based job policies and severe dependence on youth are the causes that often lead to these issues. However, the severity of this problem can be reduced by the government taking appropriate measures in making policies that provide a well-paid job to aged people as per their qualifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33236151603 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93686596298 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545189504373 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3960031297 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350105837006 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1184309592 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804131077082 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232637865395 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029397676289 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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