Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of this sitiuation? Suggest some possible solutions.
When asked about healthy lifestyle, the majority of people believe that the past generation was more dynamic and healthier than residents at present time. This essay will look at the main causes and propose some viable solutions to the problem.
To start with, the development of modern equipment is blamed for being less potent and flexible. To illustrate, at workplaces labour forces take advantage of automatic machines and robots to work physically demanding jobs. Coming along with this is at home, they spend spare time watching movies on TV and playing games online instead of doing physical exercise. Take agriculture for example, unlike in the past, farmers adopt automatic equipment like harvester and watering systems instead of the utilization of labour power. To tackle this problem, the government should launch some campaigns to raise awareness of taking care of well-being as well as encouraging inhabitants to exercise on a regular basis by doing gymnastics, yoga and swimming.
In addition, unhealthy lifestyle is associated with junk food. Nowadays, fast food is rich in fat and low-quality ingredients as well as being popular with most inhabitants. It comes as no surprise that they prefer fast food to home-made meals because of saving time for their hectic timetable. However, junk food is blamed for health risks like obesity, high cholesterol, and blood pressure. To address the problem, people should give priority to home-cooked food which is nutritious and full of vitamins to stay healthy.
To sum up, due to unhealthy food habits and abuse of electronic devices, people become passive and poor health. Thus, the government should encourage residents to take part in sports. Coming along with this is that people themselves should choose home-made meals over junk food to improve their well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31724137931 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68563802573 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0206961185 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107843870535 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363437960931 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525208650354 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771935766992 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588406216773 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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