Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Finance is always one of the primary concerns of most people, especially after they retire. While some people believe that individuals need to save money for their own post-retirement life, others may hold a different viewpoint. In my opinion, each person should actually be responsible for saving up in addition to other sources of financial support.
On the one hand, saving money is what many people ought to consider doing in order to have a fulfilling life when they get older. To begin with, savings enable the elderly to be financially independent even when they are no longer in their job. They are thus not considered as a burden on other people. For example, if they are in trouble with their health, they can use their own money for treatment rather than having to rely on anyone else. In addition, compared to old people with no money, those who have some savings in hand are likely to live more positively. They are able to do whatever they like without any worries about life. For instance, they can comfortably indulge themselves in a range of recreational activities, such as shopping or travelling around.
On the other hand, some other financial aids may also be deemed necessary for the retired. Firstly, it is the young generation who should be in charge of supporting older members in their family. By doing so, young people can show their gratitude towards their parents in return for what they have sacrificed for them in the past. Secondly, the government should also play a certain role in providing retired people with special welfare. This is truly reasonable because they have made many contributions to society throughout their whole working life.
In sum, it is each individuals’ responsibility to decide how their post-retirement life could be. Even though various financial aids are granted for the elderly, being well-prepared for rainy days can bring a more fulfilling life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99686520376 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74224263243 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0529704456 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7647058824 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358843769271 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116046232377 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742569820121 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224007907514 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659237875418 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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