Task 1
The diagrams illustrate the Duolingo's digital data, which includes the total number of users worldwide, the distribution of app usage across electronic device platforms, and the most learned languages. Overall, The USA ranks first among the total people who is using Duolingo as a language learning tool . In a similar manner, the iOS device platform is the most popular for users to learn and English is chosen by users to learn more than any other languages.
The graphic represented 6 countries with the most app users in the ordinal ranks. The United States and Italy are the two countries which are ranked first and ranked sixth among the top 6 using Duolingo with 25.8% and 5.1% respectively.
Meanwhile, there are less than a fifth users are from Brazil and nearly one in ten users are Mexican. Furthermore, the proportion of users was higher in France, at 5.7%, than in UK, at 5.2%.
Not surprisingly that almost people used iOS and Android devices to study language from Duolingo, just 23% people used Duolingo on the web to train their language. Moreover, The next pie chart shows that the six most commonly learned languages in the world. It is striking that nearly half of users learn English. The second and third place were Spanish and French, with nearly 24% and 13,6% respectively. Subsequently, German, Italian, and Portuguese hold the last three positions 8.7%, 5.7%, and 3.6% respectively.
- In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small commun 78
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using Facebook as a means of online instruction You may compare with other tools like zoom etc Relevant examples of your own experience can be included 89
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples from your knowledge or experience 84
- As you have had a long break and been free from school due to the worldwide spread of a new fatal disease you may have a chance to reflect on many different things in life What do you think are the positive and negative aspects found revealed in by this m 92
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to tool'
Suggestion: to tool
...s using Duolingo as a language learning tool . In a similar manner, the iOS device p...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing Duolingo as a language learning tool . In a similar manner, the iOS device pla...
^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Duolingo as a language learning tool . In a similar manner, the iOS device platform is the most po...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'user'?
Suggestion: user
... Meanwhile, there are less than a fifth users are from Brazil and nearly one in ten u...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59038007746 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4512738434 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.