Some decisions are tough to make and once such case is moving-out from our hometowns. As difficult as it seems, mixed emotions and family bonding's, is what makes it even-more harder. However, I pivot migration to different cities for better prospects rather than to stagnate in a small place. Without any prejudices, I try to enunciate various advantages of immigration in this essay, as a support of my opinion.
There are many benefits for younger generation by relocating to another place. Firstly, jobs and quality life is prima facie reason for youth to venture this step. Afterall, we cannot expect flooding opportunities in our career unless we make a move towards better tomorrow. In most of the cases, earning and financial stability is impossible for growing family needs. Secondly, education and career planning is another concern for youth, as most of the times countryside lack in schools and colleges. Finally, learning new skills is another aspect many of us point to this exodus. Apart, many other issues like health, need of change in surroundings prompts us to take this new journey.
Nevertheless, some argue that it's best to stay-in the native towns as moving out means weakened family bonds and losing ancestral business. Whereas, current technology and transportation makes this statement obsolete as world is now becoming global village. Surely, it's painful to be away from one's parents, but always to be remembered that it's just temporary. Few suggests that, home sick makes some people to be devoid of their surroundings but nonetheless not a good factor in comparison to the bright future. In my own personal experience, as an example, my initial struggle to adjust to surroundings after moving to Hyderabad from my town, proved to be worth all of it when I got promoted to better position. Furthermore, we can spend two or three weeks for festivals once in a while, whenever we get a break from regular work.
Therefore, we can safely conclude the topic by agreeing the fact that migrating to metropolis is indeed a good idea. We all have to make this choice some or other day, but should do it before it's too late. Ofcourse, we can always bounce-back to our villages and plan for retirement, if we wish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...other concern for youth, as most of the times countryside lack in schools and college...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ge. Surely, its painful to be away from ones parents, but always to be remembered th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01866666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76155704872 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4261763169 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106565088595 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297196628008 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282940501905 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610115747912 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243012947847 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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