No doubt, there are ample of ways we can maintain our relationships with people. For instance, by giving respect to elderly, good service to customers, affection to children and many more ways. But trust is an important pillar in almost every kind of relationship to stand stronger. Many people argue that telling the truth is most valuable aspect to build a healthy relationship, while others have a different point of view. Being honest, I would agree that honesty is most important consideration; so telling the truth is undoubtedly key thought for a strong bonding. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, honesty in every kind of relationship makes bond unbreakable. Being honest with family members, creates less chance of conflicts; being truthful with customers brings loyalty in them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. As a child I was always taught always say truth to my parents, which builds trust overtime. My mother always trusted me whenever somebody complaint about me. I always accepted my mistakes and never tried to defend myself, whenever I was wrong. My mother never used to scold me, but always made me to understand and realise my mistakes. This trait of mine has always helped me to become a better person.
Additionally, an honest person always earns respect, in family as well as in society. If a person usually tells lies, nobody believes him/her, even if the person is telling truth sometime. However, always telling truth can be difficult sometimes, as truth is bitter than lies. But if we choose the easy escape by telling lies, it will eventually make us fall into trouble at last. For example, my friend once lied his wife about going to picnic and when she got to knew this, she was disheartened and this incident broke her trust as well.
To sum up, it is completely upto us, that whether we want to tell truth always to make our relationships healthier or we want to escape easily by lying and facing negative outcomes in long term. Telling truth can be harder but makes bond stronger overtime, so telling truth is always mandatory in any relationship, otherwise it will become hollow with time by repeatedly saying lies.
- TOEFL Writing Task 1 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- Grades encourage students to work harder at school Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 91
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, no doubt, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89238845144 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772883709 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.793267466 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7619047619 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230953617274 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681269793498 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474062727381 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142965178722 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036217422866 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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