Juvenile delinquency, undoubtedly, is a concerning issue in modern world as crime rate among children is on the rise. A large spectrum of factors is behind this situation which are discussed in this essay. It is the need of the hour to handle this grave situation, otherwise, consequences of this phenomenon would be unfathomable.
To start with, changing family patterns have contributed to this problem to a large extent as both parents are nowadays working and children are left unsupervised. Parents are busy enough to spend quality time with their children and they are unable to ingrain ethical values in children's characters.Teenage is considered as seed sowing time in form of good values which reaps results later in their lives. Earlier, children used to live in joint families and their used to be grandparents and other people to supervise their activities.
Secondly, today, children are more inclined to watch video games and serials which involve violence and killings. Their minds are like plane slates, whatever they watch, it leaves a deep impression on their minds.They feel that aggression and killings happening in movies are real and thrilling and try to copy all those things in their real lives. Sometimes, they commit crime just because they are under the influence of role played by their superhero in a fictional movie.
Besides this, increased intolerance and lack of moral values taught in schools is also a major factor. Sometimes, peer pressure and bad company lead them to commit severe crime unconsciously. In adolescence age, young children are vulnerable and they get easily swayed by the activities of some bad elements in the society.
Coming to the solutions, first of all, parents should pay proper attention to the activities of their offsprings.They should spend time to teach them about the difference between right and wrong. Moreover, in schools, students should be taught about ethical values such as non- violence and compassion. Parents, teachers and counsellors should help children tackle the pressures of life they are engulfed with and help them to come out of depression and stress.
To sum up, children are the future of a country and everyone should ensure that they do not indulge in any kind pf criminal activity and spoil their lives. If it happens so, they should be cared properly to leave that path of guilt and darkness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14615384615 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76585858306 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0644951808 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213949473677 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066870077913 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398318008926 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104352749123 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250572350709 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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