In some countries at secondary or high school there may be two streams of study academic or vocational

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In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study: academic or vocational.

Today, academic and vocational streams of study are provided at secondary or high school by many countries in the world. Education system should provide benefits to the students as well as to the society. Academic is mostly related with theory with limited practical on the other hand, vocational stream is related with more practical.
Most of the countries are facing unemployment and low economic development problem in the world. Education system is the back born of the country and its development. Due to that most of the country want to provide academic and vocational steams to the teen age students.
Teen age students are very active and fast to learn and adopt new things in their life. It is better to provide academic and vocational steams to at the age of fifteen because, those age in the mid part of their teen age. Actually, both academic and vocational are much important for the successful life of a human. academic helps to enhance the knowledge whereas, vocational helps to enhance their practical knowledge with life skills. Academic and vocational subjects for the young age students will lead for the employment opportunities, entrepreneurship, problem solving skill, maximum resource utilization and reduction of poverty in the world.
In summary, most of the country specially, developing countries ought to consider to develop well education system with academic and vocational streams for the teen age students. Success of the system depends on its greatest development and implementation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: teenage
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Suggestion:
...eatest development and implementation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, second, so, well, whereas, as to, in summary, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30165289256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89670600439 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48347107438 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5233434132 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264440280116 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105325109611 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133170159089 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174837065334 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799011023066 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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