The argument between big salary and job satisfaction is one that has lingered among employers and employees and different views and concerns have been raised both for and against the both arguments. However, i argue that Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
My first point to argue in favor of big salary is that with big salary, an employee is able to meet up with his daily expenses and live a comfortable life. for example, i remember while working for a firm, my salary was way too big that i was able to cater for my bills and my daily expenses and my aged mother who had loads of medical bills to attend to. With my salary, i took care of my aged mother without having to stress my siblings or take a loan.
Secondly, big salary enables one to invest in other ventures or businesses that will fetch more money. The ability to have more than one source of income is a blessing. For instance, after obtaining my first degree, i got a job opportunity with a big industry that payed me a reasonable amount as my salary. With the salary i earned, i was able to start a photography studio that attracted more money to me.
To conclude, i strongly believe that big salary is much more important than job satisfaction because it is more satisfying and it increases one's chance of enjoying the comfort of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5041322314 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54739917133 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520661157025 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6050417498 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240474606636 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129877998182 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119381007824 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204217168779 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107052550387 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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