Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable , while others think that it is making them less sociable . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era , technology has been booming exponentially, due to that, utilization of gizmos are being ballooned. Some populace ponder that , modern equipments are making people more friendly , however, others reckon that, it is making them less sociable. I will discuss both the views and give my opinion .
On one hand , technology is best when it brings people together . Nowadays people are becoming friendly with each other by means of modern gadgets. There are multitude of benefits and making them much sociable such as communication upon internet and communicating with other nation's people, social media - cognizance about the surrounding materialistic world , relationship Will become better and getting New friends through dissimilar applications. For an example, administration of India has taken some good decision to purify corona pandemic by means of advanced equipments and some communicating websites like WhatsApp , Twitter and Facebook through announced information about Covid - 19 as awareness - through social networking sites ; free vaccinations - whether a person has corona or not and immediate lockdown - to keep mask when meeting with each others.
On the other hand, advanced equipments always helpful more than expected, but some individuals think that, it makes them less sociable . There are some reasons : people have been paying out much quality of time upon gadgets rather than other activities , also relationship level is decreasing between relatives on account of that, people feel alone and crimes are committed by youngsters online through . The epitome of this is China where, children are playing online games like pub g ,free fire vis -a' -vis to physical games owing to that, authority has banned these are games because of not having online games. Children are facing insomnia , stress and anxiety.
In my opinion, advanced technology is making individual's life easier, quicker, less working , but it is increasing lacuna between people.
To conclude , there are several platforms which are making people friendly and helping to rise bonding level, however through modern gizmos people go astray with their family , friends and feeling isolation.
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...e games. Children are facing insomnia , stress and anxiety. In my opinion,...
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Line 9, column 687, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... games. Children are facing insomnia , stress and anxiety. In my opinion, ...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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..., stress and anxiety. In my opinion, advanced technology is making individ...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nd anxiety. In my opinion, advanced technology is making individuals lif...
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Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... In my opinion, advanced technology is making individuals life easier, qu...
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Line 11, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...pinion, advanced technology is making individuals life easier, quicker, less...
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Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nced technology is making individuals life easier, quicker, less working , but...
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Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...als life easier, quicker, less working , but it is increasing lacuna between p...
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Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ker, less working , but it is increasing lacuna between people. To conclude ...
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Line 11, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...g , but it is increasing lacuna between people. To conclude , there are seve...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... lacuna between people. To conclude , there are several platforms which are...
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Line 13, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ple. To conclude , there are several platforms which are making people fri...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ude , there are several platforms which are making people friendly and helpin...
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Line 13, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...are several platforms which are making people friendly and helping to rise b...
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...ral platforms which are making people friendly and helping to rise bonding ...
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...orms which are making people friendly and helping to rise bonding level, ho...
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...re making people friendly and helping to rise bonding level, however through...
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Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... friendly and helping to rise bonding level, however through modern gizmos ...
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...ly and helping to rise bonding level, however through modern gizmos people ...
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...to rise bonding level, however through modern gizmos people go astray with t...
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... level, however through modern gizmos people go astray with their family , ...
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... however through modern gizmos people go astray with their family , friends ...
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Line 13, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hrough modern gizmos people go astray with their family , friends and feeling...
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Line 13, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rn gizmos people go astray with their family , friends and feeling isolation. ...
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Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...s people go astray with their family , friends and feeling isolation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61329305136 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8185360183 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631419939577 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.4268407 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.923076923 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 150.0 5.01903807615 2989% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364202643365 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129698758891 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108236739569 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19457510534 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857291752435 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.