Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?
In this era ,all people want to high professional jobs for fulfilling their dreams and needs . In present time, physician, nurses and Mentors make a great benefaction to the community and should be paid more than entertainment and well-known sportsman. I partially concur with the statement.
On one hand ,tutors and medical practitioners have been playing pivotal role on earth because, nowadays , proportion of corona pandemic people is increasing and it could be taken people's life nevertheless , doctors are finding vaccine of covid-19 to save patient's life. Moreover,the foundation of any sagacious country is its education system. Students have been got manners and become Pundit in particular fields by means of educators. Administration ought to pay more than sports celebrities. For an example, India, where authority has been emphasizing upon teaching and paying much salaries to mentors and having a best infrastructure of universities, on account of that, Indian students have got job into fortune 500 companies vis -`a- vis to other nations.
On the other hand, people are fond to mimic the famous actors and sportsman ,also majority of people are inspired by them. Paying much cash upon entertainment and sports, there are some benefits for people as well as authority : it is helping to improve economy of nation; it gives them and aspiration ; it is source of relaxation and people can make them future brightly in sports fields. The epitome of this is, India where government has started sports academies, because all student are not able to be mentors and doctors in future those ,who are not able to study for them. They ought to join sports stream and make them future shining.
To conclude, giving salary equal on educators, doctors and sports celebrities because, both are essential for developing the nation and source of income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26174496644 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82987471774 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4767545896 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175459314761 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644678194067 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888390938257 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115103974564 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602212189343 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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