Some people think that all universities students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views with regard to whether students should be entitled completely to decide their curriculum. While some argue that the students should only focus on subjects which may be beneficial to their future, I firmly believe that everyone should be able to study the courses of their choice
On the one hand, focusing on key subject areas such as those related to science and technology brings some certain advantages. Because demand for labor in these fields tends/has a tendency to increase more and more, it can be argued that these courses in university provide more job opportunities, better salaries, career progression and consequently improve life quality for students who take them. On the societal level, advances in such areas are the main factors driving the economic growth in the modern world. Therefore, high skilled workforce in the field of science and technology can lead to new interventions, promote economic growth and secure a thriving future
In spite of these arguments, I believe university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. Firstly, each subject has its own particular role in contributing to the comprehensive development of students. Indeed, while scientific and technological subjects help enhance the ability of logical and critical thinking, the others such as sport and art are of great importance to attributes like creativity and collaborative skill. Besides, nobody can really predict which subjects will be most useful to society in the future. Finally, the process of acquiring knowledge can merely be productive when students passionate about what they are learning
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only the most useful subjects, I personally prefer current system in which students have right to study whatever they like
- Some people think that all universities students should study whatever they like Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give 89
- Some people think that all universities students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and giv 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39310344828 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81330286466 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1292583351 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.777777778 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8888888889 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394207269012 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133389841794 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945378152838 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217150237552 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601570802482 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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