The line chart illustrates monthly mean temperatures in Sydney, London and New York . The tabular data details how many hours of sunshine they have on average annually.
Overall,while London and New York experience almost the same temperatures throughout the year, the opposite trend is true for Sydney. The greatest number of hours of sunshine is seen in New York.
New York is the city which experiences the highest and lowest temperatures during the whole year. More specifically, it has the coldest temperature at the beginning of the year with about 4° and then becomes warmer month after month. Coming to July, the city sees the hottest month which almost 30°. Subsequently, this figure starts to decrease and remains the same lowest temperature (5°) at the end of the year.
Similarly, in London the coldest temperature is in January and December with just below 10°and the hottest temperature (23°) is had on July. Interestingly, annual number of hours of sunshine in London is 1,180 which is nowhere near as New York with 2,535.
By contrast, turning to Sydney, the temperature starts to decline from January to July and reaches the lowest point with just above 15° and rising back at the end of the year. Sydney is the second most sunny city with 2,473 compared to London and New York.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...peratures in Sydney, London and New York . The tabular data details how many hours...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
... they have on average annually. Overall,while London and New York experience almost t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96803652968 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63449777233 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1356639019 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244260974339 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985531220076 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390830809791 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140596895257 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450181745617 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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