Some people believe that charity organizations should give the aid to those who are in great need, while other think that the charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Some people think that donation organizations must only assist their own country. Meanwhile, the other argued that these fund organizations should offer the assistance to necessitous people regardless of where they live. Before any firm opinion, I would like to explicate some factors in the support of both.
On the one hand, some individuals think that the charitable organization ought to enable residents who live within the boundaries of their country. There are many advantages for this choice, for example, the citizens can give a helping hand from the charity organizations really easy and fast because they are in the same nation or in the same area. Secondly, charitable donations for natural disaster in same country can be easier than live far from each other, especially when your country is effect by flood or hurricane. However, this point of view can not enable the contribution corporation get a more popular and donations in the other nations.
On the other hand, if the charity organizations aid people regardless of their place and background, it should be given many benefits in a long period. As you think that we all are human and living on the same planet, so our primary responsibility to help each other in an emergency situation. For example, due to global warming, many animals and trees died in the burning of Amazon forests, in order to regrow those trees, there are many charity organizations in all over the world was able to afford the fund and creating a similar environment.
In conclusion, although there are many views, I believe that the donation organizations must help mankind from any part.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0332103321 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79361871001 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6407050965 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365256517257 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128855000718 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692916287862 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195023088355 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663782211757 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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