The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skill To what extent you agree or disagree?
The increasing crime rate among youth is one of the pressing problems across the globe. Some argue that taking few sessions with parents and understand the nuances of parenting could solve the problem, I agree to this statement. This essay will discuss the importance of strict internet and entertainment policy at home along with keeping tabs on peers or friends in restricting the youngsters to break the law.
To begin with there is ample evidence indicating that controlled entertainment viewing is detrimental in shaping an individual’s behavior. The central reason for this is young minds are easily impressionable and they learn what they see. Restricting the usage time and content to watch at the same time enrolling in a career assisting activity or course would have a positive effect. To exemplify this,a BBC survey states that kids who have a restricted screen time growing up have a clean legal record and end up with a white collar job. Theroefore it is conclusively clear that it is crucial skill to administer the time kids spend on browsing web or on the genre of movies and shows on tv.
Secondly, it is also essential to ensure that peer group of a child is not malign. As most of the time is spent with friends or classmates who have a greater effect on a nascent psyche, it is to the parents to observe and screen their buddies and social groups. To illustrate this, a survey conducted by the Oxford university at the New York State Jail outlines that 80% of juveniles have committed a crime by the lead of their companions. Thus it is possible to state that identifying a possible sinister mind and distancing the child from them is an important parenting skill.
To conclude, in my opinion the mother and father are ought to educated about the good parenting skills such as monitoring the teenage social groups and screen time brings down the potential crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83384615385 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70280327847 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5141441945 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207466170039 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656804814131 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587196683305 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128031458084 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475335326372 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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