Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and art lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children’s families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that the government must fund music, dance and art classes for children. Others consider it is responsibility of children’s parents and charity organisations. I, personally, support the first opinion, and in this essay I will explain the reason why.
Needless to say that neither art nor dance classes are compulsory. People can exist without them, like without numerous other things. But what would the quality of our life be without them? These things enlighten us from inside, bring new colors into our life, enrich it with bright emotions. It is true that these lesson...
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