Some people state that each and every one person of this planet is uncapable of dealing with the environmental issues. In fact, they believe that only governments and big firms have the skills to differentiate the current situation. I totally disagree with this statement, because I think that individuals can improve the environmental protection, whether on a personal level or on a collective one.
To begin with, there are many personal actions that can result in rehabilitation of our planet. People might encourage their own forces through the environmental problems. In particular, the residents of each State, city, or village, can begin with their own houses from recycling the household waste to reducing the amount of water that they use in their everyday routine. Moreover, it is undoubtable that the agriculture activities harm the environment. The environmental impact of agriculture involves a variety of factors from the soil, to water, the air, animal and soil variety, people, plants, and the food itself. For example, the water used for a farm's need is enough to eliminate the water scarcity of developing countries. Thus, if every farmer halves the consumption of water for the agricultural practices, environmental issues like deforestation, soil degradation and climate change will extinct.
Not only individuals on their own, but also collective methods can affect the environment positively. Firstly, civil organizations which aim to raise awareness of the inimical effects of people's activities to the environment. To illustrate this, there are many global and international institutions that are concerned with animal wildlife, forests and oceans; World Wildlife Fund is maybe the most popular one. The latter has branches in many countries and according to a survey, it has achieved to sensitize civilians about wildlife and its protection. Secondly, associations between neighbors or residents of a country can also lead the way of improving the environment by specific campaigns. In my country, for example, there are individual associations of some neighborhoods in Athens, the capital of Greece, which take things in hand, and clean the beaches from garbage.
To sum up, even if many opine that governments and companies can react through environmental protection, in my opinion, there are a lot of movements from individuals, personally or associated, which affect the environment positively, and develop its conservation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
Some people state that each and every one person of this planet is uncapable of d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in fact, in particular, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51587301587 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16746220663 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5335612632 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.647058824 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137652687628 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462229794044 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609506667471 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954389396995 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352024053267 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.