A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction
Do you agree or disagree?
High-salary jobs are generally more stressful
People are increasingly concerned about the risk of stress-related jobs meanwhile of earning too much money, although many would prefer to continue this way in job positioning ,some would care more about how much the job could fulfill their ambition and is a proper content for their significant personal achievements . I would definitely be on the side of the argument which is following personal satisfaction and would like to state my opinion in this essay.
employees who earn a considerable income are generally under significant mental and emotional pressure to perform well and achieve targets. This leads many individuals to suffer high levels of stress which can result in physical and mental disorders. Unfortunately, some companies keep the salaries unpaid unless the sale targets are being driven out, so there is a big amount of stress among the staffs meanwhile of working extra time to fulfill this role and finally could get their rights back .this will definitely be harmful for anyone who continue this way even if the money which is paid would be high.
However, having a job which they will enjoy doing, and in which they feel valued, is a major concern for most of the modern workforces. A considerable number of people are giving up well-paid positions to do jobs not only are paid less but also find more joy and freshness. As research shows, the more you are satisfied with your workplace and job, the higher your personal performance would reach.
A year ago, for instance, I left the teaching profession because the workload had become too much great and was becoming an out of control for me ; finding a balance between how I would like to spend the rest of my time and the my real free time was impossible. So what I can mention about how my feelings are going on after quitting this job , is feeling more relaxed, less stressed , and experiencing every moment of my social life without more job concern .
In conclusion, for a high percentage of the population , earning a substantial wage is less important than job satisfaction because of the negative effects of work-related stress and desire to feel happy and more fulfilled in a job.
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| 2020-11-16 | englishessays | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89673913043 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72289152129 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8093934674 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.818181818 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4545454545 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293487349617 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106795169439 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817935546463 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167458935608 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654224849198 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.