PROVIDING A NATIONAL SYSTEM IN A COUNTRY WHERE THE UNEMPLOYED RECEIVE A REGULAR PAYMENT ONLY ENCOURAGES PEOPLE NOT TO SEEK WORK AND PUTS AN UNREASONABLE STRAIN ON A COUNTRY'S FINANCIAL RESOURCES. DISCUSS THIS STATEMENTAND GIVE YOUR OPINION?
Millions have lost their jobs around the world and the governments are faced with the economic downturn. With the increase in the number of people claiming unemployment benefits the burden on most country’s budgets has risen. In my opinion, despite the financial pressure on the governments, employed citizens receiving regular sum may be beneficial. The following paragraphs will discuss benefits of supporting unemployed with the payments with relevant examples.
Firstly, people are often unemployed due to lack of education and live below the poverty line. It becomes critical for governments to support the impoverished and aid them for basic survival else people may consider crime. For example, in India, when the Delhi state government reduced payments to poor, there was a record increase in crime. Hence, allocated budgets to assist the needy with payments to support their livelihood is extremely important.
Secondly, losing a job can be extremely stressful for the entire family, often leads to emotional disbalance. Many are not equipped to handle sudden financial stress; some even attempt suicide. As tax paying citizens a support from the government may be comforting. For instance, during the COVID 19 pandemic, retail jobs were gone over night, with job loss at such levels finding another was impossible for most people. The relief payments for $2,500/- initiated by the Canada was an exemplary effort to support its citizens who lost jobs during the COVID crisis.
Summarize and Opinion: In conclusion, the governments in most countries have regulations and budgeted provisions for provide for the unemployed. If authorities provide support by offering free training programs designed to fill the job gaps in addition to mere compensation to the jobless, it could be the beginning of a new spectrum of multi-skilled society.
- PROVIDING A NATIONAL SYSTEM IN A COUNTRY WHERE THE UNEMPLOYED RECEIVE A REGULAR PAYMENT ONLY ENCOURAGES PEOPLE NOT TO SEEK WORK AND PUTS AN UNREASONABLE STRAIN ON A COUNTRY S FINANCIAL RESOURCES DISCUSS THIS STATEMENTAND GIVE YOUR OPINION 90
- PROVIDING A NATIONAL SYSTEM IN A COUNTRY WHERE THE UNEMPLOYED RECEIVE A REGULAR PAYMENT ONLY ENCOURAGES PEOPLE NOT TO SEEK WORK AND PUTS AN UNREASONABLE STRAIN ON A COUNTRY S FINANCIAL RESOURCES DISCUSS THIS STATEMENTAND GIVE YOUR OPINION 78
- You will move to Toronto for work You know some people who live there Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for 73
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading To what extent do you agree Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer 84
- You will move to Toronto for work You know some people who live there Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... new spectrum of multi-skilled society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42013888889 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83399493569 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6616322651 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119459127385 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435565764969 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413659479928 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079306401132 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447949924611 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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