Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
To help or not, that is not the question as it is the unequivocal responsibility of every states’ national system to be a strong support when its people are faced with unemployment. However, the dole can be misconstrued, misused and, in fact, perpetuate the problem rather than fix it. It’s human nature to take the path of least resistance which is something every government needs to be mindful of. This piece discusses the pros and cons and suggests an alternative workable plan to address the dichotomy of government support in managing the unemployed.
As the adage somewhat goes, “give a starving man money and you have helped him for the moment, but give him a fishing net and you have helped him for life!” -Unemployment can be a traumatic time especially for a bred-winner. It can result in hunger, poverty with mental and emotional problems in extremely situations. Marriages sometimes end in divorce and the family unit can be in crisis. Money is a sort of a hygiene factor at the most basic level as it’s an enabler. Governments giving out dole prevents family life from coming to a grinding halt.
However, this is a double-edged sword as it could result in a complacency and laziness- a lack of interest in finding a new source of income for the unemployed. Governments, therefore, should develop a plan considering factors such as duration of unemployment, earning potential (based on qualification and work experience) and number of dependents on the bred-winner to develop a comprehensive plan for giving out dole to the unemployed. The amount and duration of payment given by the state should take the above factors. This way, the Government support comes when the person needs it but the receiver of the payment is obliged to look for employment. At the outset, the scheme could offer some incentives i.e. sooner the employment received, higher the monthly payout. Likewise, a diminishing rate of payment with every incremental unemployed month.
A government payout scheme must be multivariate rather than simplistic. A system that not only supports but encourages a change of behavior. It will result in not only giving much needed relief to the unemployed but will also hugely reduce financial strain on national resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'its human nature'?
Suggestion: Its human nature
...petuate the problem rather than fix it. It’s human nature to take the path of least resistance wh...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the least'.
Suggestion: of the least
... it. It’s human nature to take the path of least resistance which is something every gov...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'sort of'.
Suggestion: sort of
...amily unit can be in crisis. Money is a sort of a hygiene factor at the most basic level ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, in fact, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08870967742 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98654220256 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3397158339 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144509097986 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431832153762 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452780802781 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923842918769 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453841844931 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.