Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Whether or not to subject animal to experimentation and testing has been an ethical debate for a while now. I would like to use skin and hair care brands to express my point of view here.
In the hierarchy of life, humans are seen as several notches above other life forms on the planet we live in. This is self-proclaimed superiority is a convenient truth the world has allowed ourselves to adopt. Therefore the argument virtually becomes a non-issue in the minds of those who support it. While my personal value system does not subscribe to this thinking, in the spirit of being unbiased, I will acknowledge the role of animal experimentation has saved many lives like in the case of the HIV and Ebola vaccines.
The moot point of the argument rests on whether or not animal testing is addressing a life threatening objective or is it being undertaken for commercial gain by glitzy skin and hair care brands for profit.
Not very long ago I prided myself at being a well informed shopper of cosmetic and hair care products. My shopping purchases were largely driven by well researched brand information which made the promise of youth and hair gloss. slick adverts which direct your attention to a slew of end cosmetic payoffs. However with the proliferation of social media, I am much wiser and better informed. I now have connected with like minded communities who believe that beauty is just skin deep as the real issue is with how those products came to be in the first place. In my quest for the truth I stumbled upon the EWG - the environmental working group which started off as a small support to analyse toxicity in products and they now have a mega- database of 200,000 data points covering most Fast Moving Consumer good categories which works a guideline to consumers. The also provide an ethical rating to products which most top end cosmetic and toiletry brands are threatened by.
Interestingly, brand formulations with high toxicity are the brands that frequently use animal testing. The pertinent question, therefore, is why is it that the FDA and authorities alike allow these chemically loaded products to pass through their approvals. They should be banned and governments should instead only allow the production of organic & clean products in the market which don't require animal testing. They could offer tax-free incentives to manufacturers and educate consumers on the benefits of using these chemical free products.
Just one government directive could help humanity solve the health crises and help support a cleaner more, ethical world for generations to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00460829493 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75111978028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582949308756 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.378025983 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.315789474 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143400939122 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405817075066 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512929929752 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728186704721 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365747086049 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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