Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts, and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, most of the people are more concerning about their appearance and how to get attraction by others. For that, they spend more and more money on clothes, shoes, haircuts and so on. However, some people argue that there are better ways to spend money. Although seems like both of the arguments are considerable, I believe it is good to spend money for more important things than beauty products and all.
It is true that people should concern about their beauty and the way how they look like. Because, by being good looking, there are many social benefits can be gained. Firstly, i...
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- Many people spend a lot of money on clothes haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance Some people think that it is a good way to spend money while others think that there is a better way to spend it Discuss both views and give your opinion 86
there are many social benefits can be gained.
there are many social benefits that can be gained.
wearing neat clothes always have affected to get a positive image
wearing neat clothes always has affected to get a positive image
if anyone look deeper on it, it is one of main factor for today's society
if anyone looks deeper on it, it is one of main factors for today's society
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