Nowadays each country has multi-lingual and multi-racial people from various other countries. Due to the globalization, there are better opportunities available worldwide. As a result of this, people started to migrate to other countries for better lifestyle and job opportunities.
One of the reason observed behind this migration is the better recognition of skills from foreign countries. People start to immigrate wherever they get a high pay scale job, shift their families, obtain permanent residence and slowly become it's citizen. Though there are restrictions in few countries to become a citizen, majority of the countries issue citizenship to most of the foreign settlers. Also, people are getting incentives for their cross engineering or IT skills which is much required for the economic development of a country. Slowly but steadily, indigenous people are replaced with upgraded foreign immigrants. The other reason that can be attributed to this collaboration is the advent of modern transportation. It is easy to commute to even the remotest place with advanced flights and jets. This has bolstered people to even shift their entire livelihood to other countries.
The biggest advantage of such multi cultural groups being together in a nation is the compassion developed towards other ethnic groups. It can elicit a feeling of brotherhood inside the people such that we can find unity in diversity. Learning new languages from various other people helps in better communication. Learning new traditions and mingling with new people helps to improve the socio-relationships between countries. For example, the Canadian prime minister Justin Trudeau is a trend setter of this century who expertise in inviting people from eclectic ethnic groups with due respect and compassion. Perhaps, his magnanimous nature helps in a better nation building and recognition by other countries worldwide.
To recapitulate, despite the fact that infiltration of other nationality people can decrease the job opportunities for native people, the positive vibrations from socializing outweigh the shortcomings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63522012579 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14192334264 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8359470931 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272366202326 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816937362605 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536618420365 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164157993686 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276791491031 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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