Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Stepping into the 21st century, multi-cultural diversities and multi-ethnic societies have its limitation as well as merits, and from my point of view, there are many reasons explaining why people tend to emigrate from this country to another.
With the aim of obtaining a better living standard like advanced healthcare services, multiple career prospects or even generous subsidies, some of the developed countries are likely to become ideal ends of many immigrants over the world. Taking American as a typical example, this country has become a dreamland of migrants who want to seek a well-paid job as well as a homogeneous society. Furthermore, their offspring may acquire a better educational system as well to receive a comprehensive development.
Regarding the benefits, people from various cultures use multiple different ways to make a better life in their new home. To make it clear, the inflow of immigrants such as high achieving scholars, engineers or other highly skilled professionals creates conductive competition, innovation as well as productivity, key elements in any globalized economy. Also, people may have chances to broaden their horizon by exposing a larger audience to the traditions of their own country. However, some people stick to their own ethnic group and do not interact with other groups, thus creating the opposite of united society. Somehow, this leads to racial discrimination in several areas, especially in America where has still existed the distinction between the White and the Black man.
In conclusion, although having lots of benefits, multi-cultures' drawbacks should not be forgotten. Personally, I firmly believe the government's control plays a vital role to make sure the smooth running of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47426470588 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03556048977 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5025474777 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237547071019 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735789409262 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748981288502 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133847243476 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836264816254 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.