People say that a child’s success is dependent on the way parents bring them up. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It has argued by a significant number of individuals that children success story is best possible through their parent’s way of taking care. Although parents are the great helping hand for a child to show the right directions on a timely basis, I am of the opinion that other people like, friends are equally important in bringing the kids achievements.
Environment influence the person to do its daily activities, a surrounding circle has a lead role to play in person mind and that can be easily related to his success. In the case of children, the students spent their most time in schools with their friends, and they guide them whenever is the need and accordingly. For instance, European kids are more involved in soccer and they dominate all over the world in that and Asian kids in cricket, hence, I believe that good friend circle is more important to have victory in life.
On the other hand, parents are those, who know their kids from day one and the ways how to guide them on time for the successful outcome. Pupils at an early stage of life are unaware of their right or wrong things and parents are the first who can guide them from initial stages of their career, which will have an impact on them for the lifetime. Therefore it is vital to have good communication between parents and their kids which can shape their career paths to have a better outcome in future.
In conclusion, while, parents play a necessary role in guiding their children to have success in life from the initial stages of career, it is also important for a child to have good friend circle which will help him in achieving good future at different intervals in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...individuals that children success story is best possible through their parent's wa...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'influences'.
Suggestion: influences
...g the kids achievements. Environment influence the person to do its daily activities, ...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ave an impact on them for the lifetime. Therefore it is vital to have good communication ...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...r career paths to have a better outcome in future. In conclusion, while, parents play ...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... future at different intervals in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67796610169 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46928619599 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522033898305 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8540445676 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142207151082 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683850575138 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456702282748 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967025152239 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533567570824 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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